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Then, a soft, rhythmic pulsing emanated from the newly revealed chamber, drawing our eyes away from each other.
As the stone groaned and retreated, the light from the inner chamber didn't reveal gold or jewels, but a single, hovering parchment that pulsed with the rhythm of two hearts beating as one.
As the stone groaned and retreated, the light from the inner chamber didn't reveal gold or jewels, but a single, hovering parchment that pulsed with the rhythm of two hearts beating as one.
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## AUTHOR DIRECTION — BUTTERFLY EFFECT CASCADE (Ch07)
- Kaelen is not present. He is dead. Do not write him as alive.
- The isolation that brings Mira and Dorian together is partly driven by the fact that Mira's most trusted ally is gone.
- The "Weave of Ages" revelation, if it occurs here, has extra weight: Kaelen died believing in something that turned out to be real.