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 # Character State: ch-07
 
 ## Sarah Miller
-- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
-- **Physical:** Bilateral hearing loss (profuse ringing); bleeding from ear canals; severe tremors; soot and ozone residue on skin.
-- **Emotional:** Cold, tactical clarity; massive adrenaline crash imminent; grim satisfaction.
-- **Active obligations:** Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of Elias’s death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-02—unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (ch-06—unresolved): the "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her.
-- **Arc:** 60% — She has fully transitioned from observer to combatant, using her specialized equipment to successfully repel a non-physical entity.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
+Physical: Profound bilateral tinnitus and temporary deafness; dried blood on ears; severe tremors; adrenaline-fueled exhaustion; vocal strain.
+Emotional: High-functioning shock; intense relief mixed with tactical focus.
+Active obligations: Owes Elias Thorne a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Sarah] Digital recorder "ghost-looping" (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] Validation of 1927 occult chants (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Sarah] The apparition’s vision of Elias’s death (ch-06) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-02--unresolved): Carries 1927 occult chant data; CARRIED (Ch-06--unresolved): The "Whispers" weaponized her professional shaming against her.
+Arc: 60% — After surviving a direct assault, she has moved from tactical aggression to active reliance on Elias, confirming their partnership.
+Permanent: YES
 
 ## Elias Thorne
-- **Location:** Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway (immediate proximity to Sarah).
-- **Physical:** Exhausted; internal synchronization with the 14Hz hum is peaking; no visible external injuries.
-- **Emotional:** Protective relief; deep-seated fear of the "The Great Silence" following the spike.
-- **Active obligations:** Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
-- **Open loops:** [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias & Sarah] Physical safety from the Archive's breach response (ch-07) — UNRESOLVED.
-- **Known secrets:** CARRIED (ch-01—unresolved): Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED (ch-02—unresolved): belief the signal is sentient/biological.
-- **Arc:** 35% — Has successfully intervened in the physical world to reach Sarah, moving from theoretical study to active rescue.
-- **Permanent:** YES
+Location: Miller Household, Second Floor Hallway.
+Physical: Elevated heart rate; minor cuts from forced entry; heavy breathing; heightened sensory awareness.
+Emotional: Overwhelming protective relief; desperate resolve to explain the truth.
+Active obligations: Owes Sarah a logical explanation (ch-02) — UNPAID.
+Open loops: [Elias] 1927 "Great Silence" signatures (ch-01) — UNRESOLVED; [Elias] "Wet iron" scent origin (ch-02) — UNRESOLVED.
+Known secrets: CARRIED (Ch-01--unresolved): Signal matches his pulse; CARRIED (Ch-02--unresolved): Belief the signal is sentient/biological.
+Arc: 40% — Elias has successfully completed his transition from passive scholar to active rescuer by physically bridging the gap to Sarah.
+Permanent: YES
 
 # World State: ch-07
 
 ## NPC Memory
-- **The Whispers (Entities):** DEFEATED/RECEDING — Blasted by a 110dB feedback loop; Sarah’s experimental gear has effectively "ruptured" their manifestation in the Miller home.
+- The Whispers (Entities): Hostile/Receding — Driven back by Sarah's sonic burst and Elias's arrival; they remain a lingering atmospheric pressure but have lost direct manifestation for now.
 
 ## Faction Attitudes
-- **Archive Administration:** Hostile/Aggressive — Their containment protocols have been bypassed; Elias's breach is now a matter of internal security.
+- Archive Administration: Hostile/Alert — Security is likely tracking Elias’s unauthorized breach of the Miller residence.
 
 ## Active World Events
-- **The Great Silence:** Following the feedback spike, the supernatural 14Hz hum has vanished from the Miller residence, replaced by a heavy, unnatural quiet.
-- **Electronic Dead Zone:** The Miller household electronics are permanently destroyed by the high-decibel recursion loop and electromagnetic surge.
-- **The Convergence:** Elias and Sarah are now physically united at the epicenter of the investigation.
+- The Great Silence: A heavy, unnatural quiet following the feedback spike; environmental electronics remain dead.
+- The Convergence: Elias and Sarah are now physically united at the epicenter of the Miller residence events.
 
 ## Environmental Constants
-- **Location:** Miller Residence.
-- **Atmosphere:** Thick with copper, ozone, and the smell of toasted wiring.
-- **Lighting:** Pitch black/Zero visibility; occasional flickering of battery-operated emergency equipment.
-- **Audio:** Absolute silence punctuated by the high-pitched ringing in the characters' ears.
+- Location: Sarah Miller’s Residence.
+- Status: Structural acoustic damage; shattered glass; scorched electronics; lingering smell of ozone and copper.
+- Lighting: Pitch black, save for Elias's flashlight.
+- Audio: Absolute silence punctuated by the ringing in Sarah's ears.